I'm writing a book about a girl who can "jump" into books. She is colored, headstrong, smart, capable, and distant. Anything but trendy. But I feel like I'm missing something.

Md Ariful Islam

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2025-01-04 04:42

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Dr. Md Rushad Rahman

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You're missing flaws. Don't write a Mary-Sue. Even the strongest characters have weaknesses. In Lord of the Rings, Boromir had the want of the One Ring as his flaw. In Star Wars, Anakin's flaw was pride. In Harry Potter, Ron's flaw was jealousy.

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